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Satisfying Eve
>> Wednesday, August 31, 2011
icy pin pricks of pleasure
tickle my skin
I never knew your smile hid so much
behind those lips lies a serpent
a tongue so perfect
I lay like a stemmed apple
ripe for temptation and wrath
and this is just the beginning
since you are not yet naked
Robert Lloyd
31 August 2011
Yeah I know I have been on slightly erotic kick lately. It could be a mid life crisis who knows.
12 comments:
Don't know if I was meant to laugh at the climax but I did... couldn't help myself ;)
haha that was a fun piece, wonderful build up and great conclusion. Like the everything was done, yet barely even there yet vibe.
well now...seems like its about to get hot in here...nice allusions to the Fall...
dont know if i was meant to climax at the laugh but i did...couldnt help myself ;-0 - whats gonna happen once the clothes come off - thanks man enjoyed reading your piece
hmm now i see what you meant...getting hot in here...but be careful..sometimes the spell is broken once they are naked...smiles...
Oh my word! Every poem I've read today has been so spicy. I feel naughty. :) This is an excellent poem, I say as I blush and step away from the computer for a spell. ~safehousepoetry.wordpress.com
Naughty? Or rather delicious? Either way, it paints a picture of anticipation.
A highly effective poem, Robb.......it even got a reaction from ME, in my dotage, who has Totally Given It All Up. Hee hee.
Well done... love the play on the theme. Beautifully shared.
Saucy, and nice! Tongues ARE things of beauty and delight. :)
I like it, Robb. Spice is nice!
This one is clearly inspired!
Well done bit of eroticism, Robb.. Mid-life? Not likely. Good life more like it.
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